Save the dugongs!

well when he is trying to push the cart can his face really turn a shade of violet in the burning heat? wouldnt it turn a sweltering red instead? If ...

First I'll be critical and just revising it for detail: -Watch your punctuation on line 6: no apostrophe on others. I liked how you transitioned from the topic of power ...

Two reasons why i like it. 1) It is not too long and easy to read. 2) It relates to something that many writers can understand and empathise with. Some ...